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Visual 30 Second Message = [[Welcome To AboutUs]]
 
Visual 30 Second Message = [[Welcome To AboutUs]]
  
(HomePage) Welcome to AboutUs.org.  We're a guide to websites that you can edit, because we're a wiki.  Millions of people view our pages every month.
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(HomePage) Welcome to AboutUs.org.  We're a guide to websites that you can edit, because we're a wiki.
  
To find a page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
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To find the AboutUs page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
  
Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), different ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.
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Our pages start very basic.  This page has categories, related websites, ways to contact them, a basic description of what the website is, and three links to the website (here, here and here).
  
If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or update the page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to login to a free account.)
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If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.)
  
For example, I'll add [[:Category:Travel]].
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I'm going to edit the page and make a simple punctuation change.
  
[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been worked on a bit.  You can see that it has more text, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see that this article has been viewed # times and edited by these people.
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[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been edited and worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited by in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
  
For more information click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" (highlight these links at the top left).
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For more information about AboutUs and how to edit click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" at the top left.
  
Please feel free edit or create the page on AboutUs for any domain you like. AboutUs.org is the place for ''you'' to describe the websites and organizations that matter to you.
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Now it's your turn. Search for a website in the Find! bar above and start editing!
 
 
If you'd like to... search for a website in the Find! bar above and start editing!
 
 
 
We'd love to have you add what you know about websites
 
 
 
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Needs a nice "close"... I hate to suggest "enjoy the wiki", but something warm, welcoming & fun. [[User:Julia|Julia]]
 
:Added a closer, that make sense to you Julia? [[User:Steven Walling|Steven]] | [[User talk:Steven Walling|talk to me]] 13:45, 14 October 2008 (PDT)
 
  
 
=== separate screencasts for [[How to log in]] and [[why login]] ===
 
=== separate screencasts for [[How to log in]] and [[why login]] ===

Latest revision as of 18:50, 15 October 2008




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