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KristinaWeis: typos

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KristinaWeis: get edit in there more

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get edit in there more

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 If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.)
-I'm going to edit the page and make a simple punctuation change, and then save the page.
+I'm going to edit the page and make a simple punctuation change.
-[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been edited and worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
+[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been edited and worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited by in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
 For more information about AboutUs and how to edit click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" at the top left.

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 To find the AboutUs page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
-Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.
+Our pages start very basic.  This page has categories, related websites, ways to contact them, a basic description of what the website is, and three links to the website (here, here and here).
-If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.  If you don't have an account it's easy and free to create one.)
+If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.)
-I'm going to edit the page and add [[:Category:Travel]], and then save the page.
+I'm going to edit the page and make a simple punctuation change, and then save the page.
 [[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been edited and worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.

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 I'm going to edit the page and add [[:Category:Travel]], and then save the page.
-[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
+[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been edited and worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited in the box to the right.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
 For more information about AboutUs and how to edit click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" at the top left.

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 To find the AboutUs page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
-Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), different ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.
+Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.
 If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.  If you don't have an account it's easy and free to create one.)

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 Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), different ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.
-If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or update the page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.  If you don't have an account it's easy and free to create one.)
+If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or change the content of its AboutUs page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.  If you don't have an account it's easy and free to create one.)
 I'm going to edit the page and add [[:Category:Travel]], and then save the page.

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 (HomePage) Welcome to AboutUs.org.  We're a guide to websites that you can edit, because we're a wiki.
-To find a page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
+To find the AboutUs page about a website use the Find! bar and type in the website's address, like [[InCatch.com]].
 Our pages start very basic.  This page has a description of what the website is, three links to the site (here, here and here), different ways to contact them, related websites and categories/tags.

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 If you know something about [[InCatch.com]] you can click the edit button and add to or update the page.  (To edit pages here at AboutUs you need to be logged in, so I will do that.  If you don't have an account it's easy and free to create one.)
-For example, I'll add [[:Category:Travel]].
+I'm going to edit the page and add [[:Category:Travel]], and then save the page.
-[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been worked on a bit.  You can see that it has more text, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited by here.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
+[[UltimateGlobes.com]] is an example of a page that has been worked on a bit more.  You can see that it has a more robust description of the site, images and even a YouTube video.  You can also see how many times the page has been viewed and who it has been edited by here.  In total, millions of people view our pages each month.
-For more information click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" at the top left.
+For more information about AboutUs and how to edit click "Need Help?" or "What is AboutUs?" at the top left.
 Now it's your turn.  Search for a website in the Find! bar above and start editing!
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